I was told that my opening did not create the sense of panic like I was intending it to. I was told that the background noise took away from what was going on in the scene. I plan to use sound clips of ambient noises that I can layer over the top of new footage. I want to also include audio clips of heavy breathing and an increasing heart beat as I think this will help put the audience in a sense of panic as they can understand what the main character is going through.
I also plan to use faster paced editing to create tension through scenes, I was told to use more jump cuts as it would help disorientate the audience which would increase suspense.
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